Demon Owned You RPG
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

Demon Owned You RPG


 
HomePortalLatest imagesSearchRegisterLog in

 

 Vyraal

Go down 
2 posters
AuthorMessage
Vyraal
The Star Sniper
Vyraal


Posts : 46
Join date : 2009-08-15
Age : 27

Vyraal Empty
PostSubject: Vyraal   Vyraal Icon_minitimeSat Aug 15, 2009 7:15 am

Name: Vyraal

Gender: Male

Age: 18

Race: Human

Home: Asia

Alignment:Good

Elemental Affinity: Primary : Ice
Secondary : Plant
Tertiary : Wind

Weapons & Fighting Style: Vyraal uses Bow and Arrows, he tends to attack hidden, so the enemy will not be able to see him. Vyraal fights the coward way, and tends to flee if the opponent is stronger then him unless he has an ally with him, then he will fight without fleeing.

Personality: Vyraal is very kind, and will help anyone in trouble. It doesn't matter that the foe has an axe big as a tree and the size of a building, Vyraal will help the person first, and he is kind of a act-first-think-later kind of guy. Vyraal is also fierce when it comes to friends, and defend them straight away. Vyraal has Gynophobia, causing him to rocket backwards if a women comes close to him. Between an atomic bomb and a lady, a lady could get Vyraal up a staircase faster. Vyraal knew about his phobia, but did not do anything to overcome it.

Appearance: Vyraal has green eyes, and spikish blonde hair that is combed to the right. he wears a white shirt, with an orange vest. His shirt is buttoned up, and leaves his neck exposed. He wears a green waist with black trousers and brown boots. He also wears brown gloves. Vyraal has small green necklace, the only thing left behind by his motherr, Vyraal could not find anything else when he searched through the house.

Strengths: Vyraal can attack hidden, giving him a split-second advantage when he attacks. He is also swift, able to bound from one tree to another (think about monkeys....) and has a knife hidden under his trousers, so if he loses his bow, he can use the dagger instead.

Weaknesses: Vyraal suck at close-ranged attacks, and cannot take heavy blows. Getting hit excessively is not a good thing for Vyraal, so he has to keep away from the enemy. Also, Vyraal is TOO helpful, which mean a foe in disguise can fake being hurt and when Vyraal goes to help them.....well, take it this way- the bait gets eaten by the fish...

History: Vyraal lives in Asia, and his family was killed by demons during a battle. His mother was a housewife, and his father was a warrior. His father fell first during a war at an uknown area in Asia, his father's body was never found. Then a group of succubus attacked his house. Vyraal was 4 that time. His mother died pleading for mercy, and his elder sister, fought but died as well, falling on Vyraal, pushing him into the fireplace so the pile of bodies(his maids and his sister and mother) hid him from view. Because of seeing his mother and sister dieing, killed by succubus in front of him, Vyraal somehow developed a fear of women being close to him, but he has no problem fighting them. But Vyraal likes looking at women though . Vyraal then travelled around Asia, helping people despite his Gynophobia. Vyraal burried his family near his house in a graveyard, and goes to visit them every few months.After that, Vyraal escaped to another part of Asia, and took up fighting with the Bow and Arrows, training with a man he met during his travels. the man taught him how to use the weapon, and Vyraal, wanting to avange his family, trained hard. Vyraal soon mastered the weapon, and travelled Asia, looking for the deathplace of his father.

Pictures: Vyraal Guy-tales-of-the-abyss-4545
I know that's a sword, forget about that sword...


Last edited by Vyraal on Sat Aug 15, 2009 8:11 am; edited 2 times in total
Back to top Go down
Drakel




Posts : 438
Join date : 2009-08-08

Vyraal Empty
PostSubject: Re: Vyraal   Vyraal Icon_minitimeSat Aug 15, 2009 7:17 am

More description on appearance.

And the Chaos gate just opened recently. Like 1 year at most. And you need more description in your history as well.
Back to top Go down
Vyraal
The Star Sniper
Vyraal


Posts : 46
Join date : 2009-08-15
Age : 27

Vyraal Empty
PostSubject: Re: Vyraal   Vyraal Icon_minitimeSat Aug 15, 2009 8:00 am

Edited. bump?
Back to top Go down
Drakel




Posts : 438
Join date : 2009-08-08

Vyraal Empty
PostSubject: Re: Vyraal   Vyraal Icon_minitimeSat Aug 15, 2009 8:01 am

History is fine.

You never gave more description to your appearance. Try to make it four lines.

And for personality, add in how he acts around girls because of his phobia you mentioned in the history.
Back to top Go down
Vyraal
The Star Sniper
Vyraal


Posts : 46
Join date : 2009-08-15
Age : 27

Vyraal Empty
PostSubject: Re: Vyraal   Vyraal Icon_minitimeSat Aug 15, 2009 8:12 am

Edited
Back to top Go down
Drakel




Posts : 438
Join date : 2009-08-08

Vyraal Empty
PostSubject: Re: Vyraal   Vyraal Icon_minitimeSat Aug 15, 2009 8:12 am

Okay good enough.

Approved.
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content





Vyraal Empty
PostSubject: Re: Vyraal   Vyraal Icon_minitime

Back to top Go down
 
Vyraal
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Vyraal, The Star Sniper
» Total Hotness (Vyraal and Drakel)

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Demon Owned You RPG :: Creation-- :: Character-
Jump to: