Duckey Tesla

Name: Mattox “Duckey” Tesla

Gender: Male

Age: 17

Race: Human

Home: London, England

Alignment: Neutral

Elemental Affinity: Lightning, Space, Fire

Weapons & Fighting Style: Mattox uses a wide assortment of weaponry and uses a defensive style of fighting. His weapons include:
A Machete: Mattox uses his aikido training to dodge many attacks without blocking one if possible, then when the opponent gets close he cuts real good.
A Claw gauntlet: Mattox generally is more offensive when using the claw gauntlet. It is large enough to be used as a small shield.
His hands and feet: Mattox is a master of Aikido and Tae Kwon Do
Mattox also carries around minor explosives on his person. Sometimes used as traps or just all around offensive weaponry.

Personality: Mattox loves the rain and storms, So England was a fine choice for him to stay. Mattox is a genuinely nice person who will try to befriend anyone to support his cause. Despite this, He makes sure to always be careful. He will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, and persistence is one of his greatest traits. Mattox is also quite chaotic, as his skills with chemical have given him quite the knowledge of explosives he tends to, when given the chance, to blow stuff up. In combat, he will do everything he can to fight until the last breath, and make his sacrifice worth it. This trait will ultimately lead to his downfall.

Appearance: Mattox has dark black hair that is fairly long. His eyes are a dark violet and his eye sight is great. He has an slender yet muscular build, so he is not the strongest but still pretty strong. His normal outfit consists of a pair of red goggles with the radioactive symbols on the lenses. He normally wears a faded firefighter's jacket that Mattox personalized by making it thinner and more lightweight. He wears a plain pair of jeans which is a bit longer than his legs, and a few belts around his waist, one of which has the small sheith for his machete. His feet are protected by steel toed boots.

Strengths: Mattox has, as stated above, amazing eye sight for a human. Mattox has a minor knack for defense, but that is mainly blocks and then using the enemies momentum against them.

Weaknesses: Mattox has some slight weaknesses, such as he can be a bit too trusting. This is not to bad though, he has never encountered someone who stabbed him the back. Mattox is also slightly weaker against The elements of Light, Darkness, Twilight

History: Mattox was born 17 years ago in southern north America, but he soon moved around a lot. Mattox went across the entire world, almost to every major city, in the first 5 years of his life. He was then settled down in London to give him a place to grow up. He lived with a foster family for a good while, which was ok, but he liked what he remembered of his parents. They were Chemical Engineers for a company, Aperture Science, and that is what got him into chemistry. But then when he was 13, then he moved to a house of his own, because his foster family was killed. Mattox did some research and found out it was the government who did it. They knew something noone else did, but they never told Mattox. He kept it simple, wood floors, cinderblock and plywood shelves, blanket on the floor for a bed. By 14 he was getting good with chemistry and explosives, and began to get extremely skilled. A few years went by, and Mattox was on his way to America to take out one of the Aperture Science buildings in America when the gate was found. All hell broke loose, and chaos ensued. It ruined his plans to destroy the governments one by one. He now plans on going across America to the atlantic ocean and destroying the gate and everything that ever came out, and then continue with his plans.

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For Race you never described in your history how you have a demon descent.

Add a physical weakness.

And over all more description.

well that part is unknown, he has no clue, and it doesn't show through till a bit later.
weakness, check,
detail, working on it.

It doesn't matter if he doesn't know, you OoC do know how it happens. So add that in anyway.

And for the weakness, List all the elements that you are weaker against, just for clarification.

Bump when complete.

alright. it is all in there, and detail added.

How can he be of demon descent when the first demon to ever go to the portal is about the same age as you? Sorry, but that won't be able to be allowed. You're going to have to be completely human.

For your strengths and weaknesses are they things you are drastically good/bad with or just slightly?

It was a dimentional anomoly, or something. idk. but ok..

Just slightly.

No loopholes.

Okay edit it in that you are only slightly better at blocking, and only slightly more vulnerable to those elements.

it was just a thought.

alright, that should be in......now.

You still need to edit the unknown demon descent out of the race and edit that out of the history.

And try to make it at least ten lines, you're making you past vague which doesn't really help us understand why your character got the way he is. And leaves room for you to make false stories about the past. Just remember, if it isn't in there it didn't happen, so no making it up as you go...

ok, hmmmm......well sorry, but i can't think of anything else, and would i have to list everywhere he went as a kid? cause that list would be extremely long..

What did he do those first five years?

Did he like his foster family or did he hate them? Give reasons.

What inspired him into chemistry?

And what's his motive for destroying all of the demons? Did they do anything or is it his pride for the human race?

That's all you really should include in there from what you've put. Though those are just suggestions.

alright, i added some of that in.

Hmmm, interesting.

Unless Lilith, wants to be strict about your history length or detail then....

Approved.

bump

Re-approved.

I just added in some stuff in the history.

Re-approved